
Did you know that? Guess what, it's true.
Here is a sample of my work. It is a simple business card with some important info blotted out (it is still in the draft stages).
Here, it's all about the carrots. Life that is. Tasty. Crunchy. Healthy. and Colorful. Life is good, so Eat Up
Today
The clouds started to part. It had stopped raining. White moonlight shined through, reflecting off of the wet, oily street.
Jack ran down the street., not sure of where he was going. He only knew that must not go with that man, John Fischer, whom he had spoken with almost 3 minutes ago.
Something about the man's voice didn't sit right with Jack.
And what about the man he had punched? He seemed familiar, though Jack didn't know why.
Jack didn't even know if his name really was Jack. It was just a name on a wristband. Jack Fletcher, #431.
The sun would be up in a few hours. He had to get out of sight. A near barefoot man wearing all white would stand out like a sore thumb here.
Speaking of which, where was “here” exactly?
A car could be heard in the distance, gaining on Jack.It was the doctor.
Jack ran hard. The black Honda's headlights were 300 yards away, and gaining. It would only be a couple of seconds now.
Shots rang out. Jack dove to the ground, , not knowing whether this would be a leap towards heaven or a fall to hell. He expected the latter.
Bullets whizzed by on his left and right. The headlights went out.
The bullets stopped.
Jack heard a car reverse and head in the opposite direction. It was the Honda!
Jack had survived!
Jack stood up, white clothes stained black by the wet asphalt. His socks had several new holes in them and his feet had developed a few blisters. Still, he lived! And the car was gone which meant Jack could relax for a moment.
Then Jack remembered what had just happened, why the car had left.
That's when several men emerged from the two alleys ahead where the bullets had flown from.
They closed in on Jack.
IMPORTANT: If you have not read both Freewrites #1 and #2, go back and read them first. The order of the freewrites is the by DATE PUBLISHED. They are not in chronological order.
Freewrite #3
Two Weeks Ago
Three men wearing white coats stood outside the room.
The second of the three men held a clipboard.
The third clenched a black and white BIC pen.
The first held nothing.
“When did he come out of it?” said Number One.
“We're not quite sure. He seems to have no recollection of where he is or who he is.” said the second, eyes squinting behind thick, broad rimmed black glasses. He stared at his clipboard.
“The polygraph says he is telling the truth.”
“We figured that there would be memory loss. The question was never 'if,' but 'how much?' Now we know.” said the third, shrugging.
“Still,” said Number One. “We can't be too careful. We have to make sure that this worked or it'll be our heads. Put Thompson in his room. See if he can get anything first. If that doesn't work, schedule a breakout.”
“A breakout? Are you sure? We don't know what kind of condition he is in, what kind of damage he can do.” said the second.
“It's the only way we will know.” said Number One.
Freewrite #2
The injured man stopped crying and started to stand up.
"Here, let me help you." said Jack, with an outstretched arm, holding the baseball cap in his other hand.
The man spat on the hand. "Crazy lunatic. I Never should have listened to him. " Then the man walked off, opposite the way he had come, as if nothing had happened...
Listened to who?
A phone lying under a covered sidewalk rang. Sounds of Vivaldi's Four Seasons filled the atmosphere, underscoring the rainy weather.
Where did the phone come from?
It must have been that guy's. Strange that it landed on the sidewalk instead of the asphalt.
Jack picked up the phone.
“Who is this?” asked Jack.
“Hello Jack” answered a deep, calm voice. “How have you been? 'Things feeling a bit out of place? That's because they are Jack. Things change with time."
“Time? What do you mean? What are you talking about?” Jack responded.
“Oh? You don't remember? Jack, you've been a patient at the ward for three years. Please, come back and we will sort this all out.” said the voice.
“Ward? I don't remember any ward. Who are you?” said Jack.
“My name is John Fischer. I'm your doctor. And by the look of things you could use my help. You pack quite a punch!” said John, tone and pitch raised.
“I see. You are my doctor, and I am the simple patient who has lost his memory? That's pretty convenient. I will say, you have me on the memory bit. I can't remember a thing. But answer me this ... ” Jack said looking sideways at a black Honda across the street. A man with short, brown hair sat inside on a cellphone.
Jack looked forward.
“What kind of doctor stalks his patient?”
“The kind who cares.” said John, deeper again.
Jack glanced at the car once more. Something was different. Sitting in the passenger seat was a man in a brown fedora. It was him!
“Don't run Jack.” said John
“Run? Why would I run? You're just a doctor, right?” said Jack.
Jack ran.
Splash! Splash!
Splash Splash!
It was raining. And it was windy. And those were puddles. Puddles make noise. And he didn't want to make noise.
For man-on-the-run Jack Fletcher, this fit right in with his day. It wasn't bad enough that he was being hunted by some deranged killer. A man with blood on his hands. Quite literally.
It had been almost fifteen minutes, just past midnight, since the would-be assassin with the brown fedora had cornered him in a dark alley behind Jim's Pizza and Eatery.
Why was he chasing him? What had he done now?
This day made no sense. Neither did the white jumpsuit he was wearing or the fact that he was only wearing white socks.
Why can't I remember anything, thought Jack.
Pulling a memory over two weeks old from his brain was like wrestling a pit-bull from a raw, sirloin steak.
Forget it. 'Can't worry about that now. Stay focused Jack and we'll see if we can't keep you alive another day.
Jack rounded a blind corner. A perfect place to get the upper-hand.
Wait for it Jack. Wait for it.
Splash! Splash!
Here he comes. One more second.
A rounded head wearing a brown fedora peaked its head out of the corner.
Slam!
Knuckled flesh struck a glass jaw. A left hook connected with the man's nose. The fedora went flying.
The man hit the ground. Out cold. But that didn't stop the blood from gushing out of the assassin's broken nose.
Jack followed the blood as it mixed with rainwater and flowed downhill, across the street.
Jack stood, bewildered.
Did I just do that?
The man's eyelids cracked open. His mouth followed close behind.
“Ahhhhhh!” screamed the man. Though whether it was a cry of pain or a cry of anger, Jack didn't know.
Tears began to flow down the man's face. His wails grew louder.
No, thought Jack, this is definitely not the sound of anger This man is in pain! Well, serves him right for trying to kill me.
Jack kneeled down to get a closer look at the man who could have been his end. Who would dare try to kill him? Who had the guts? Didn't this guy know who he was?
I wish he did. At least then I might be able to get some answers.
Jack stood still for a second and looked at the man directly in the eyes, and recoiled.
This isn't him! This isn't the same person!
Jack looked over at where the fedora had landed, except it wasn't a fedora. It was a New York Yankees baseball cap.
What is going on? thought Jack.
See, the man who has Jesus is promised that Jesus will take care of him, while the one without Jesus has no such promise.
So, when that financial crash comes, and it will, the man who had $1 billion will find that in the end he had nothing and was grabbing the wind, while the Christian who trusts in God for his provision will find himself still fed.
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