tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6613484088666762289.post4265211689589124247..comments2011-01-22T15:22:19.672-08:00Comments on Die Karotten: Class 308. Second Short Story. Rough DraftJacobhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08717657351369590530noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6613484088666762289.post-14898003057337991222008-09-08T06:33:00.000-07:002008-09-08T06:33:00.000-07:00Hey Bre!Thanks for the comment! I am glad at least...Hey Bre!<BR/>Thanks for the comment! I am glad at least one person reads this blog ;).<BR/>Yeah...I never liked the idea of him being a genius kid. It was a last minute decision I made. The entire story was written with him as something completely different.<BR/>Definitely a bad decision as it throws off the story. <BR/><BR/>TJacobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08717657351369590530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6613484088666762289.post-68324124797379493842008-09-07T23:34:00.000-07:002008-09-07T23:34:00.000-07:00I have a suggestion if you don't mind..... It see...I have a suggestion if you don't mind..... It seems that Mike is extremely smart for a 12 yr old being in a Sophomore class, but you have him as the student who needs help. If anything the school realistically if he was having that much trouble in math where he needs a helper he would be in a less advanced class then the sophomore class. Maybe you should have Mike help Katie with math instead of vise versa... just my 1st thought when reading it. It just doesn't seem realistic if the 12 yr old smart kid needs a tutor.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com